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He likes the way she sways
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He likes the way she sways |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
He likes the way her hair parts, the way it falls exposing her face While the division remains mysteriously guarded by Secrets she may tell, if the mood strikes He thinks of her as he drives and the music plays He likes the ways she sways, slow and deliberate richly aware Of the stares she attracts He likes the fact she is unencumbered by rules that rule, He’s humbled by the special delivery, a heart Minus pretenses and petty demands She gives him reason to smile several times a day She’s a blue diamond flame, the soft rain An ethereal space that dominates A voice that dictates, what he likes |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
He likes the fact she is unencumbered by rules that rule, He’s humbled by the special delivery, a heart Hooray!!! I like the rhythm in this and the way your words sway to their own Z step! I do I do!!! |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
smiling, you are such a dandy humdinger of a lady.....sincerely, thank you~! ~Atov (Z) *wink* |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
A very subtle rhythm, like a windblown sway, makes the point in the same manner as the subject. Only you could describe a 'sway' in such a way it describes also a whim. Extremely cool, AToV. ~smiling at ya~ Jeff |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling here...I know a man like this |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
and I like the way this reads....soft...swaying to the music. Very sexy images going on here. ~Salty |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
lol... good poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh I love the rhythm here! Sways so sensually! Much enjoyed...the sway..er, poem. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
ShadowRider A very subtle rhythm, like a windblown sway, makes the point in the same manner as the subject. Atov -----> Thank you kind sir, I'm glad you enjoyed the ~sway~! passing shadows smiling here...I know a man like this Atov------> well I hope he knows how to keep his sway in tip top shape....*grin* thank you passing shadows for reading, and commenting.....*S* Salty and I like the way this reads....soft...swaying to the music. Very sexy images going on here. Atov-----> Why thank you Ms. Salty for your comment, we like to sway in Texas~! *grin* Connel lol... good poem. Atov-----hey Connel, thank you~ Enchantress Oooh I love the rhythm here! Sways so sensually! Much enjoyed...the sway..er, poem. ~Hugs~ Atov----> and I enjoyed your comment, very much, smiling here, Thank you Enchantress~! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I always smile when I see a girl smile and happily dancing, as every girl should feel special and sway with her heartbeat! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, speaking of swaying, I am seeing my favorite artist...Shakira...next week in concert, and she is talented at dancing too to her music, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
AToV...can't help but say I too like the rhythm, feels so right. Enjoyed! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Lady, this one makes you feel like getting up and swaying...er, I mean dancing around the room......  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i could feel his pull towards her, finding her within the subtleties throughout the day very well writtten |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Upon the bench within the park The watches dressed complete in dark Sees as brisk wind whirls the dirt Catches hair and flutters skirt Youthful beauty strolls his way Poetry in motion within her sway. Gloom |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a blue diamond poem. Enjoyed it Very Much! |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Mistletoe Angel, what a true sweetheart you are, thank you thank you thank you~!! ~ATov Martie, I'm glad you enjoyed the rhythm, it's good to sway every now and then~! *wink* ~Atov garysgirl, oh, I LOVE the dancing uh, lady.....wow, so cute, and thank you dear lady for your kind words! ~Atov inkedgoddess, what can I say, but thanks a huge heap~ *smile* ~Atov Professor Gloom, for someone who deals in a life without smiles, you certainly gave me one~! thanks you~! ~Atov Sunshine, your picture is the epitome of "sunshine" OH MY, what a SMILE~! Thank you! ~Atov |
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