Open Poetry #24 |
.......dream repair....... |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
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~~~~~ torn and tattered yesterday's dreams drape themselves wearily over Hope's closet door desperately in need of the healing stitchery that can only be administered by Life's expert tailor - Faith ~~~~~ Chris Barker 2003 ~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
" desperately in need of the healing stitchery that can only be administered by Life's expert tailor - Faith" Yes!! I know what you mean exactly little sister! Keep the Faith! All will be well... ~Love and hugs to ya! Teed~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
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Hi Teed!! Thanks....yes, I wish you were here...or I was there...or we could meet somewhere in the middle..oh, you know. love and miss ya!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
You got to have Faith....it keeps you going. Short and sweet, this was a nice read. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
bklyn boy - thankyou for your comments. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) This is so very true, sweet friend, this is so very true and may faith always be the tapestry of your soul and fill you with delight! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-21-2003 08:00 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
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Awww sweet Noah, you have such a way with words. Thankyou so much. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
FAITH!!! YES! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Without Faith, it's really difficult to get through life. Wonderfully written Chris ... Snuggle up and keep warm ... hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Man, that is really a good poem.. And im not lieimng.. I really did enjoy that poem.. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Goidsparkless - Thankyou so much. Marti - many thanks dear poetess Connel - I am glad that you enjoyed. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your title drew me in, and I am so glad I stopped by to read. Faith is a wonderful fabric to weave, even when it's tattered it binds the threads that give us hope. Loved the way you wrote this Chris~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
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Blues - thankyou so much. I loved your comment. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cute and clever analogy to make your lovely poetic point.. a quilt of faith and hope. good to see you posting again poetess Chris-girlie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Faith? Hope? One and the same? Both, beautiful... just like you and someone else I know... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Janet Marie - Thankyou for reading and commenting. My muse seems to drop in only when she wants to, and then "poof" she's gone. lol. Karilea - thankyou for your sweet words. Hope is nothing without Faith....I believe. hugs!! passing - thankyou for the applause. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris, what a clever write! I love it! It's a piece of perfection! Warm hugs and appreciative smiles, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Linda..hello!! Thankyou for reading and commenting. Where have you been girl? "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is such beautiful thoughts written into beautiful words. I enjoyed... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel - thankyou my friend!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Love the way you wrote this. So true about faith. Enjoyed this wise poem much. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Pat - so glad you enjoyed. Thanks! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris--Beautiful and lifting...much enjoyed! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
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Martie - thankyou dear poetess!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
Wonderfully written Chris Christine |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Christine!! Thankyou!! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
nightshade, this poem has is so special. it is so nice to have faith |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
carol - thankyou. If I didn't have my faith..well...I might not be here right now. Glad you enjoyed. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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