Open Poetry #24 |
Dear Marsha |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
As we grow older, And hair turns to gray, Our thoughts and our bodies, Change in some ways. A friend or a loved one, Passes on-leaving grief, But they leave us with memories That touch us so sweet. The soul never dies, Nor their memories depart, They'll talk to you daily And live on in your heart. Time brings us healing, It takes quite a while, But their soul lives within you, And will soon bring a smile. May God bring you peace, May your heart quickly mend, May your tears turn to laughter, Till you're together again. [This message has been edited by Toerag (01-21-2003 07:24 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
its good to see your softer side dear sir. This is sweet and heartfelt. Much enjoyed and ..made me sigh. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Well you touched me with this one. Well done |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Mr.T-rag, it's very difficult to know what to say when giving support to someone who has gone thru so much heartache lately, but you said so well everything I also wish for Marsha and family. ~a miserable sigh~ JkF |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yanno, sweets... the times are few when I'm literally moved to tears by words... but this is one of those times. The poem is incredibly beautiful... but the caring heart that created it is even more so. My deepest thanks, dearest friend... this one will reside in my library and have a place of honor in my heart. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Toe...Sir. You've done a wonderful thing here... you held her hand. Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have a wonderful soft side... I know Marsha appreciates it. I enjoy reading this side of you. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Toe, This is so well written; sensitive, compassionate and filled with love. It is so hard to know what to say and how to say it when trying to comfort the bereaved. With grace, you just did. Hugs to you and may Marsha and all families and friends involved find strength and perseverance throughout this sad time. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Toe.. wonderfully kind of you sir..and I know it will be treasured.. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
May God bring you peace, May your heart quickly mend, May your tears turn to laughter, Till you're together again. Reads like the a gift of prayer. Beautiful sentiments ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
these have been my thoughts, that I just couldn't make into words yet..thank you for doing so.. hugsss Marsha M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Toe darling man what can I say but thank you In shadows now I’ll walk awhile Until the dawn brings again soul’s smile And though he’s gone from this place I’ll still contain his loving trace The shadows don’t seem so lonely Now I know you’ll walk with me I thank you for the gift of this For the sweet touch of friendships kiss Sorrows shadows murmur my name They hunger to snuff out my soul’s flame And though they crowd all around me They can’t keep me there eternally And while I know that you are there I’ll feel the touch of souls who care So when I emerge from shadows night I’ll walk again in friendships light Shadows hover too close and near The touch of them is cold and drear And though they seem like friends to me The place they haunt is so lonely Thank you then for this gift from you Which shields my soul as only hope can do Friendships touch will steady me When the road ahead seems too lonely And though I walk with shadows all around Friendships hand holds me safe and sound Marsha It is with eyes that are blurred with too many tears I read this and I thank you for the touch of your loving heart that has given me this gift. Thank you always for your kindness and for having the kind of soul that is willing to aid another in times of need Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-21-2003 11:31 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As I'm reading this thread I'm silently crying. It brought back memories of my late husband. Mostly, though, it brought memories of how my friends were so loving, compassionate, and supportive during my time of mourning. Buzz, it takes a special kind of person to be able to write the feelings inside their heart the way you've done here. Even though lots of people feel this way, they don't have the ability to tell their feelings. Thank you for letting our Marsha know how we all are feeling for her. Marsha, I am truly sorry for your loss. All I know to say is that your "family of friends" here at PIP are right by you and will support you along your path of healing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh gee.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You certainly did this hearthug poem with your arms wide open. How very true it is that we keep any one that we love alive long after they depart in our thoughts. I wish to sign this lovely poem to Marsha as well so she will know that I too also feel her pain, and wish she reaches a place of understanding and acceptance soon, and also the love of her life finds his peace too. You are a wonderful man you realize that right? Take care of yourself Marsha. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-21-2003 02:00 PM).] |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh gosh marsha, I spend so much time working and so little time here that I didn't even know.....big big hugs lady....and toe, this is wonderful...thank you |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I not only want to thank you for all the kind replies but also for supporting Marsha in her tough times....thanks...Toe |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Soft words from a big man....nicely said, Scott |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Toe~ Such a tender penning for our Marsha. You've spoken the feelings of many, and you've done it beautifully. You have a heart of gold, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I just have to say ((((((((ToeRag))))))))), Thank you for so eloquently expressing what our hearts can only feel...how utterly sweet of you! My heart sighs in grief knowing that our sweet mushy is facing so deep a trial. My prayers and love are with her and her family...holding out the same hope...that her tears will turn to joy and that they will be reunited one day. (((((((((Mushy)))))))) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely write here Toe. Just lovely. Marsha dearest heart - I am truly sorry for your loss & pray that your heart will be warmed by all of the love for you here at Passions. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Toe--A tender and heart felt write for Marsha. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How sad and lovely this is, Toe. The serious side of you. Peace, Cor |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well spoke Sir Toe. |
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