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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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whisper foggy eyes inhale this make it memory breathe me play me on twin screen as I kiss the lids' repose tracing finger under lip nuzzle wet beneath your ear slowly softly succulent-- worship that you'll never see. in memory's keep-- knowing now, why God counts hairs. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is quite brilliant if I may say so myself. Creative view and enjoyed. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I chisel you in memory's keep-- knowing now, why God counts hairs. ========================== *smiling at you* "counting hairs" ... yer so kewl moth memories...me fav kind   I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah....you always amaze me...and always for different reasons.( chuckling) This...I think I will keep... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 ~~I Love You~~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You do have an interesting vantage point here, serene one - Velly, velly intellesting indeed... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
serenity - Wow, I am keeping this one for sure. This is simply wonderful!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
God's not done counting yours... Excellent! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, "I chisel you in memory's keep." That I do. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sweeyie, Definitely a awesome one to start the morning off with, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
startled a bit? Nan is doing Colonel Clink (sp?) imitations? grin... gotta love it. Thanks all...and I don't mind the counting hairs bit, as long as they are counted from my head and not the sink.  Hugs and love to you all... and WHOA. SISTER CERENITY!!! WELCOME HOME LOVELY ONE!!!  |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Cool... Enjjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I really like this one. It's a  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, a whisper is just a pitch above inaudible yet it speaks with the best clarity of all, yay, I love it! (big hugggssssssss) I love your style, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi serenity...sometimes it's the smallest gesture that means the most..yes?  [This message has been edited by Martie (01-23-2003 12:07 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I cna't even think of a word...just know that i love this, and the last stanza is awesome! |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*grin* Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen~ I'm smiling and loving this one. You're just too cool. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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