Open Poetry #24 |
Tonight's Light and the rest of my life |
GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Down to the earth * * * I fell with dripping wings Heavy things won’t fly- * * * And the sky might catch on fire to burn the axis of the world * * * that’s Why * * * I prefer a sunless sky To the glittering and stinging in my eyes… * * * * * * * * * * * * And I …feel so light * * * This is all… I feel tonight * * * And I feel so light * * * Tonight and the rest of my life * * * Gleaming in the dark sea I’m as light as air …floating there, breathlessly When the dream dissolves I open up my eyes I realize that - Everything is shoreless sea A weightlessness is passing over me And I feel so light * * * * * This is all… I feel tonight… * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * And I… feel so Light… Tonight and the rest of my life Tonight and the rest of my life * * * * * * * * * * * Eternity is waves and stars… The universe is resting in my heart * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * I feel so light This is all I want to feel tonight I feel so light Tonight and the rest of my life And I feel so light This is all I feel tonight And I feel so light Tonight and the rest of my life Tonight and the rest of my life Everything is waves and stars… The universe is resting in my arms I feel Light… this all I feel tonight… I am Light… Tonight And the rest of my Life * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Everything is waves and stars… The universe is resting in my heart I am Light… this all I am tonight… I am Light… Tonight And the rest of my Life **************************************************** [This message has been edited by GOlDsparklESS (01-21-2003 01:24 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is an exquisite write of surreality and serenity...and so very unique and creative, which is your trademark style Though my soul may sleep in darkness ... it will arise in perfect light. For I have loved the stars much too fondly to be fearful of the night. (author unknown) I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really pretty the way you did this. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! I really enjoyed this floating and drifting around here |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
hehe thank you! this is poem is my faith. it was inspired by nina gordon's song " tonight and the rest of my life" |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
save a bunch of grammatical errors and all those star thingies, this poem is worthy of publication. |
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