Open Poetry #24 |
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Tonight's Light and the rest of my life |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Down to the earth * * * I fell with dripping wings Heavy things won’t fly- * * * And the sky might catch on fire to burn the axis of the world * * * that’s Why * * * I prefer a sunless sky To the glittering and stinging in my eyes… * * * * * * * * * * * * And I …feel so light * * * This is all… I feel tonight * * * And I feel so light * * * Tonight and the rest of my life * * * Gleaming in the dark sea I’m as light as air …floating there, breathlessly When the dream dissolves I open up my eyes I realize that - Everything is shoreless sea A weightlessness is passing over me And I feel so light * * * * * This is all… I feel tonight… * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * And I… feel so Light… Tonight and the rest of my life Tonight and the rest of my life * * * * * * * * * * * Eternity is waves and stars… The universe is resting in my heart * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * I feel so light This is all I want to feel tonight I feel so light Tonight and the rest of my life And I feel so light This is all I feel tonight And I feel so light Tonight and the rest of my life Tonight and the rest of my life Everything is waves and stars… The universe is resting in my arms I feel Light… this all I feel tonight… I am Light… Tonight And the rest of my Life * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Everything is waves and stars… The universe is resting in my heart I am Light… this all I am tonight… I am Light… Tonight And the rest of my Life **************************************************** [This message has been edited by GOlDsparklESS (01-21-2003 01:24 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is an exquisite write of surreality and serenity...and so very unique and creative, which is your trademark style ![]() ![]() Though my soul may sleep in darkness ... it will arise in perfect light. For I have loved the stars much too fondly to be fearful of the night. (author unknown) I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really pretty the way you did this. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! I really enjoyed this floating and drifting around here |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
hehe thank you! this is poem is my faith. it was inspired by nina gordon's song " tonight and the rest of my life" |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
save a bunch of grammatical errors and all those star thingies, this poem is worthy of publication. |
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