Open Poetry #24 |
opposites |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Hmm uh yeah Really I'm seriously Not the girl next door Nor am I the type of girl To make the first move Immersed in negativity More so than often I like to wallow in my own self pity When I'm drunk I even like to kiss The stars at night When I don't have my kitten Curled up at my side Yeah really I'm drowning in reality Sickened by my naivitie On love and on expressing My feelings Sure okay why not They say opposites attract But maybe not in this case I'm too stubborn Too damn cynical to believe In love at first sight anymore So hmm uh yeah Take your sweet roses And shove them in the gutter I'm going home Back to the time When I had a mother A time when I was younger Didn't need anyone But the shadows and my crayons I'm tired of being a walking contradiction Go before I beg you to stay Before I go ahead and tell you What I really want to say... |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Very nicely written... "Sickened by my naivitie On love and on expressing My feelings" You did good on expressing some of your feelings. Enjoyed reading it Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its a hard line to walk between the two sides; i know it myself |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Surely in my case scenario, the opposites didn't attract one bit! (wipes tears) Joanna said so many things I used to believe in, now she says she never ever said those things, my heart goes out to you as I can relate to this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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