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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2003-01-20 02:38 PM


Hmm uh yeah
Really I'm seriously
Not the girl next door
Nor am I the type of girl
To make the first move
Immersed in negativity
More so than often
I like to wallow in my own self pity
When I'm drunk
I even like to kiss
The stars at night
When I don't have my kitten
Curled up at my side
Yeah really
I'm drowning in reality
Sickened by my naivitie
On love and on expressing
My feelings
Sure okay why not
They say opposites attract
But maybe not in this case
I'm too stubborn
Too damn cynical to believe
In love at first sight anymore
So hmm uh yeah
Take your sweet roses
And shove them in the gutter
I'm going home
Back to the time
When I had a mother
A time when I was younger
Didn't need anyone
But the shadows and my crayons
I'm tired of being a walking contradiction
Go before I beg you to stay
Before I go ahead and tell you
What I really want to say...

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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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since 2002-12-10
Posts 123
California
1 posted 2003-01-20 02:58 PM


Very nicely written...
       "Sickened by my naivitie
       On love and on expressing
           My feelings"
You did good on expressing some of your feelings. Enjoyed reading it

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-01-20 06:15 PM


its a hard line to walk between the two sides; i know it myself
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3 posted 2003-01-20 07:21 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Surely in my case scenario, the opposites didn't attract one bit! (wipes tears) Joanna said so many things I used to believe in, now she says she never ever said those things, my heart goes out to you as I can relate to this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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