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Open Poetry #24

Poetic River

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-12-18 02:06 PM

Poetic River
Professor Gloom

Listen to the words
Flowing like a spring river,
Gliding over rocks
Cool from far off snowy peeks
Refreshing to the drinker

Gloom

Response to Earth Angel’s poem
We Kindred Spirits

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-12-18 02:11 PM

I am so pleased to see that you posted this little beauty as I had suggested!

It needed to be enjoyed by more people than just those who may have read this lovely tanka reply you had made to my poem.

warm hugs,
EA

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-12-18 02:18 PM

Thank you, Earth Angel
Pleased you enjoyed my words to request the higher posting.

Gloom

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

3 posted 2002-12-18 03:08 PM

it's stale think, just words that
paint a picture. no feeling. well ..
i guess thats what poetry is, just,
not my taste. so, wouldnt be
fair to judge it. keep it up.

-chris.

Elan
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since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

4 posted 2002-12-18 03:41 PM

A poetic flowing, indeed.
Thank you, professor...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2002-12-19 01:29 AM

what a picture!

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2002-12-21 10:49 AM

A thirst only words can quinch....

~~ Connie ~~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

7 posted 2002-12-21 11:06 AM

Enjoyed the taste of this.

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