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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-01-19 07:24 AM



Aesthetic experiment
We sculpture absurd silhouettes
                             Into metaphors

Modeling living colors
To balance harmony

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
scorpio
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1 posted 2003-01-19 10:39 AM


Nothing absurb in this...you are in harmony with the words..

believe in what your heart feels...

winston
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2 posted 2003-01-19 11:00 AM


An apothegmatic poem. Made me reflect (fortunately, there's no mirror in my study ). Thanks.

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zenny
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3 posted 2003-01-19 11:09 AM


*gosh*
just.. beautiful..

Hugs, kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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4 posted 2003-01-19 11:18 AM


Beautiful...perfectly beautiful!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-01-19 11:24 AM


Grin...one of the perks of being a poet, the ability to interpret a world that is otherwise indescribable. Well Done!
ThisDiamond

Bridget Shenachie
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6 posted 2003-01-19 10:30 PM


I always marvel at the way you put words together!

Shenachie

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7 posted 2003-01-19 10:33 PM




           

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9 posted 2003-01-20 03:05 AM


WOW!
This is good.
I oughtta try some magnetic poetry,
that looks fun.

Though I'd never be able to do that!!
But thats what makes un individuals

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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10 posted 2003-01-20 11:43 AM


delicious mosiacs
remembrances with attached meaning
the pale of once vivid colour
as memories fade...

as so often with your work, Karilea,
your poetry is just the beginning
of thought
and springboard for inspiration
JkF

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11 posted 2003-01-20 11:45 AM


you are making me want to do this again...

sigh. you KNOW I will now...

such a zen quality.


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12 posted 2003-01-20 07:09 PM


enjoyed
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