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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-01-19 05:28 AM

Tears For Him

She's crying on my shoulder
over problems with
her lover.

She's made a mess of my shirt sleeve
and she keeps sobbing louder.

I don't mind comforting her.
I will gladly help her recover.

When she's finished shedding tears for him
I would love to be
her lover.

JamesLee
January15
2003

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2003-01-19 11:08 AM

She's crying on my shoulder
over problems with
her lover.

You're a better man than I James.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-01-19 04:40 PM

well written!
friends and relationships can be confusing, can't they?

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-19 06:17 PM

Good write James!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-01-19 07:18 PM

(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a very sensitive and loving person and I know she would be happy to have you console her and possibly accept your plea! (sigh) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-01-19 09:07 PM

waiting on the sidelines to catch her from falling, what a sly one you are,james!

smart boy!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-20 03:59 AM

good that you're a friend right now...that's what counts

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2003-01-20 09:30 AM

that's what friendship is about, n'est ce pas?

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2003-01-20 11:15 PM

I really liked

Tara

dhicks03
Member

since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

9 posted 2003-01-21 01:21 AM

Nice Write!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-01-21 02:16 AM

Sometimes good friends turn into more.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-01-21 04:15 AM

James~
You have no idea how much I can relate to this.
Well said.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

visitvenus
Member

since 2002-12-30

Posts 101
PA, USA

12 posted 2003-01-21 08:09 AM

Those who are there for us when we need them are remembered and looked at in a new light eventually...

Nice write!

-Venus

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