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The safe one
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The safe one |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
The golden ring on my finger and through my nose only binds me to my moral obligation. It cannot deter me from looking beyond the confines of my current world. I long to share your world and be on your fringes to be taken in and let you find I am the safe one. I am not the player of the younger generation I can hold your heart and not break the trust. I will not tempt you and tease you not reply to your letters or gifts. for I am the safe one. I can share your thoughts and understand their meanings I can share the passion but not expect more for I am the safe one. You can give what you can and thats ok for the boat we share is driven by the a single engine I am there for you whenever I am needed asking nothing in return except to be your friend your lover for I am the safe one. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
sounds like playing it safe, might be the way to go. Good write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea, bklyn, and what if your wife is a crazy assed bitch like me, finds out, and want to blow us both awaY? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, I can relate...well. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well, this is one of the best mind screwing endeavors I've seen in print. You are the safe one?..sounds almost like a pervert and I can just see the come here little hurt, vulnerable girl, let uncle hug you.....this gives me the willies and No, I never even had a close uncle. I liked what Michelle had to say and agree. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Regards, You kinda missed the point I was making. I was trying to say, if someone, needed to fool around, it wasnt the thing to do with a young impetuous guy. A more mature indiviual might be a better choice. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, I see, like a daddy or uncle. Where I come from that is called incest, of a kind, whether it be conscious or subconscious. I don't think I missed the point, I think you missed mine. Overall, this is a good poem to teach women what this man willing to have sex is really about. Just that. No commitment to her except fulfilling her sexual needs, a liar, a cheat all for her...would you assume she is supposed to feel good about that? Why not at least find an unmarried one (older) (with the advent of viagra, who would know the difference) to fool around with. What is wrong with not having sex for awhile! There are some women who would relish an affair on the side with no strings attached, but, why for heaven's sake would they want to choose a married man????? Just so you know, there is no shortage of men to sleep with who are single and older and kind and loving and gentle and can spend the night, the next night and the whole week-end, where it mutually NEEDED/wanted.... To each his own. If, ~IF~ you(the character) had an open marriage and you and your wife agreed to your proposal in this poem, while I may not condone it, (none of my business) that at least leaves out the lying and cheating and dishonor! I do wonder, too, what this character means by bound by "moral obligation", I don't think he'd know a moral if it was floating in his soup. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-20-2003 06:14 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I've heard those same descriptions before..only to find out that they didn't mean a thing as time went on... M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! I just love this, sweet friend, and I hope your offer is accepted as you have a sensitive heart so deserving of true love! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
This is fiction about a married guy who hasn't fooled around but is tempted with a married woman who has but with younger men. Thats why the married guy is the safe one. He is not the threat but just a friend. I have no clue where your incest statements come from. I apologize for hitting a nerve but I appreciate your thoughts! So on this note you win and I dont want to take it further. I will write again on more bland topics. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well, as i said before, married men/married women have spouses, and who knows how they would react to finding out they were cheated on; all i could tell u, friend is if youre gonna take the plunge, dont leave home without some protection  |
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