Open Poetry #24 |
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A Horse Of A Different Color |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-18-2003 04:57 PM).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Healing will come, it always does. Beautifully written piece of heartache, Noah. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - stay well my friend... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
easy to say but try to take things in a more detached way...be well |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Write it out sweetie....you will be okay. ~Hugs & Luv, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, The ghost of your bouquet haunts the night, enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Haunting refrain - in fact haunting, all of it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this took my breath away.....so stunning sweet friend.... ![]() ![]() I sing to life |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, you need to snap out of this, friend! This is not good for you! Life goes on and you should too! Love is everywhere! Open yourself up to it! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Love and Separation destruction and reconstruction of that elusive inner self is the only method of Final Separation and reparation and, if along the way, we pass with a sidewize glance at our old shell we can delight in knowing that all of yesterday's paths are knowledge and maps on where to go for today (inspired by and written for friend Noah) Noah, the Edvard-Munch expressionistic painting was a wonderful touch to a perfect description of Love and Seperation....sigh [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (01-19-2003 11:00 AM).] |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Noah, very beautiful expressed keep writing, my friend, love will come again, also to you Hugs, kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it ![]() |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Time will heal, Noah. And pray to God for strength... angsana |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this poem Noah. ![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Noah, forgive me for pulling this back up, but I went back to see some of your writing as you have been so nice in commenting on mine. This write is simply sensational, and I cannot put into words how much I too have felt this. God has a plan for you Noah! Keep the faith! Dennis |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"My fairest white horse is a horse of a different color it seems Take my heart, take my eyes from their sockets I need them no more, just leave me be..." I loved those lines, such meaning...This is by far my favorite one of yours. Beautifully sad. Susan C. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, this is beautiful, but sad.... ![]() I hope that you are feeling much better.... ![]() We all love you here, and I'm sure that special woman will come into your life real soon....Keep the faith, dear friend.... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-12-2003 11:23 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dearest Noah, At the end of those fallen rainbows are pots of gold. You may be richer for this sad experience than you think,or, can even imagine. God be with you. Hope and strength and love to you, Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Noah~ Warm hugs to you Deb |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, you are such a sensitive--and brilliant--talent! This really got to me--I mean R-E-A-L-L-Y!!! You've turned your pain into poignant poetry! May the smile soon return to your sweet face! The world is sad when an angel cries. Warm valentine hugs, Linda |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
you always write with so much beauty and passion reminds me of the passion of some of byrons or tennison's work. Very well done! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
You have a powerful voice, Noah! Rf |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Ouch, it's just painful to have to go through that, isn't it? I love the way you wrote this. The repetitions give it a lot of unity, start to finish the theme was solid and unwavering... I especially like your use of similies and metaphors to try and describe the man's state of mind. Beautiful work, Noah. quote: This is my favourite part. Smoky and bare... beautifully put. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
"I'm sorry if you swam a thousand seas to get here But you mean nothing to me!" Yes young one. Words which have been spoken many times to one's ear. But to move along is all we can do. You will breathe again and when you do, the fragrance will be everlasting. |
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