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Open Poetry #24

Shadows Haiku

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-01-18 01:05 PM

Darkness weakens me
makes me tremble when my sha,
dows block me from you

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-18 01:07 PM

interesting

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-01-18 01:08 PM

passing- heehee you are cracking me up today with your one word replies.. are you reading this stuff?

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-18 01:11 PM

Hey, Kellie

I like the way you did this..breaking up the word "shadows"....

Aren't these little things fun to write?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-18-2003 01:12 PM).]

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2003-01-18 01:13 PM

Garysgirl- ya, they are awesome fun to write, i had to teach them to my th graders and i never wrote them before, i like it now!!! I am learning a lot teaching my 6th graders.

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