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In Mime
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In Mime |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
In Mime pallor grips the morn as the greening grass attempts to brighten it does so with such motionless silence incapable of speech too still for sign-language still it tries and above it in stiff repose stand remnants of fall’s ecru and umber a still-life that lingers as a whisper frozen in time-- a mime of quietude ©January 18, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Virginia, I love it when you write like this. It's just as beautiful as the classic poems I read. Thank you...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely read. If we traveled backwards, from end to beginning, would the road, I wonder |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
virginia, very much liked this little treasure, the flow, the description.  lots of love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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