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paladin
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0 posted 2003-01-18 10:09 AM


In a bombed out house
A broken doll in the waste
A scared child crying

Those who have never been in a war cry loudest for war.


paladin

....a knight without armor


[This message has been edited by paladin (01-18-2003 12:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-18 10:17 AM


yes, and we heard the cry but still walked away

ignorance is not bliss,
it is the death of us all

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-01-18 10:31 AM


in the bombed out steets of the bronx,
even the yellow flowers grow, come springtime

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3 posted 2003-01-18 10:38 AM


AMEN  


Never thinking of the little children

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4 posted 2003-01-18 10:45 AM




I utterly cannot not imagine that scene, or, to have to be there and look at it and hear it, and have to be part of it.....they who are protecting my country....

cannot imagine...The only time I can see what it does is to look at our veteran's, those who make it back home and then watch them being  treated worse than most people treat their pet dog.  

Perhaps if we put uniforms on our "leaders" and let them be on the front line, let them rush the beaches, and let them jump first, we'd  be less likely to go to war.... right!

Thanks for this minute glimpse of a much larger scene of war....

Warm wishes and God bless you, Pat  





..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-18-2003 12:06 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-18 11:22 AM


paladin
We have but ourselves to blame.

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6 posted 2003-01-18 12:24 PM


Well said Paladin!
Such a very sad thought...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Kellie_Cantrell
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7 posted 2003-01-18 01:09 PM


Way to pala... i love the poem!! short and to the point very sentimental.
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8 posted 2003-01-18 01:12 PM


my friend, you and I are in the same city here in the great sunshine state...

it's a boring little town, ey?

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9 posted 2003-01-18 01:14 PM



But how do we take
"their"
finger off the trigger?

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10 posted 2003-01-18 03:12 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) All of our children are at risk of having to see the tears and my heart goes out to them all that we think of them all and shield them from the horror! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bbent
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11 posted 2003-01-19 12:02 PM


Well said...Thank you

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-01-19 05:08 AM


Well said...James
LadySofia
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13 posted 2003-01-27 07:09 PM


War is on the minds of us all, and for those who care not whether the buttons of death are pushed, bah to them! The words "civilized" society are a joke! I'm glad to see that some disagree with this "war". We went from chasing down criminal murderers, to attacking a sleeping beast!
NewEnglandlazurlu
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14 posted 2003-01-27 07:49 PM


This nearly ripped my heart out! DAMN.

Your last line says it all!


Bless you, Marti

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