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The Same Old Place
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The Same Old Place |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
The same old song The same old place The same old Old road Walking this same old lonely road Thinking of the same old place Where I first met your face There you standing In the middle of the crowd Where you could see me singing The same old song I can remember you staring Into my eyes You slowly pass by me The same old place Empty place Now Iam alone Sitting here Guitar on my hand same place same old song Singing It to myself You reminded me Of this place Where our hearts met On this very day The same old place |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a lonely write my friend... I think the Irish blessing should be yours.. " May the road rise to meet you and the wind always be at your back." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Enjoyed the read. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Vandana, I completely agree with Ron, on this. Blessings to you...may you find peace. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello my friend... now this is not so old a write, as you are so very young in heart... I can tell...you've been listening to the sages again! Well done, Vandana... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love guitars! If you can play, play! Maybe I will learn one day...the write is lonely, and sad...wishing you a brand new place! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Playing the guitar really does help, does it not? Just play those blues away, dear vandana! Writing and playing songs that will pick up my spirits, certainly works for me. Your writing is growing in leaps and bounds. You really get those feelings across! warm hugs, EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I really enjoyed reading this poem, though it was sad. Writing does help, though, doesn't it?  "Love makes the world go around" |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
rthytm is a dancer. and you rock, i love flow .. and i love this. work on the lyrical content, but-- yeah, awesome. **** [*****]. -chris. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
enjoyed this very much vandana. thanks. lots of love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, these are such sad lyrics, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope you feel better since yesterday! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
im groovin to the beat, cool....... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - I enjoyed this write and as I read the words I thought of me, in the same old place. Very nice, and I didn't know that you played the guitar... BC |
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