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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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To depths in venture of humility’s search. Bowing to feelings, escaping only bruised. Kneeling on shards of broken grace, saving face as winds swirl the eyes in squint of unrest. Gratefully heard, each written feel of a penned message, taken as truth, beyond question. Let not the sword reign, for wisdom’s rule shall glance the blade. And peace, true peace shall rule most humbly. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your wisdom is gratefully heard - Here's hoping you're right about the peace part...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nan, yes.. one can only hope, can they not? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It sounds like a prayer... thank you, Magnus... your muse, holding your pen...should smile. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very well written piece Magnus. enjoyed this on this frosty evening. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ, just a little bit of reflection after the skirmish...tis all...Yes, in ways.. a prayer... Thanx Chris, peace to you dear lady, on a snowy night... thanx for your thoughts.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Barry, this is lovely, sweet friend, and so very true, may we all encourage the quill rather than the sword or the mace or the scalpel and leave the sword in its sheath as a sign of loyalty! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling...Mag? you are a good man... I think they call this "integrity"  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, my young friend...thanx always...you are always there for us... Ser...smiling back...YEP! I agree.. thanx. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...great integrity. Much enjoyed and understood. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A good write, enjoyed. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, sometimes the pen is not mightier, but I hope in this case it is. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry--Sometimes words have such power to touch, like now.  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Kneeling on shards of broken grace, touching close to home.... hugssssss Lauren~ I sing to life |
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