Open Poetry #24 |
Playing G.I. Joe |
Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Daddy cut up a broom stick. I thought it was real slick. He made it into a gun. Oh...... that was real fun...... When…We were playing, G.I. Joe in the backyard. Mama worried I’d take it to far. I was daddies little man. Off to fight in some foreign land. A tear touched my dads eyes. He took my hand with pride. Said he rooted for me the whole way. Mama still didn’t know what to say. Cause …I was still playing, G.I. Joe in the backyard. Mama worried I’d take it to far. No longer daddies little man. Now I'm off to fight in some foreign land. Now I’ve got a kid of my own. Sometimes I wish she were grown. But I know how much I’ll miss. The wonderful days like this. When..We’re playing, G.I. Joe in the backyard. Mama worries she’ll take it to far. But there’s daddies little girl. Off to fight in a mans world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent, touching and so truthful. Nicely done.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dang, Albert. Be safe, and write of the good that you see, not just the misery. I wish you well. Peace, friend. Are you already scheduled to leave? |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
very touching... But I can sense your pride for the little girl. Stay safe out there.. its not just a man's war.. its a hard one of a minds battle too. Enjoyed Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Thanks all, Yea we have a window to leave in Feb. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Be safe, friend, and come back to visit whenever you can. |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Thanks midnightsun, I plan on it. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...come back soon... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Please, stay safe... and thank you. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I think more little boys would play with a Ken doll if he was'nt such a dork.LOL paladin |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Laughing at Paladin. Yes, stay safe and God be with you and your family. And, yes: ~THANK YOU~ Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, all I know to say is . . . THANK YOU, FRIEND . . . I honestly don't know what we would do without all you brave men and women in our armed services. We too often forget to thank you at times other than Veterans Day and Memorial Day.... With hugs from ~Ethel~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ada'doLisdo'ti Good twist, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This touched me a great deal...I wanted you to know. |
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