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Open Poetry #24

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Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-01-16 04:22 PM

I wish I could wave a wand
To wash your pain away
I wish I had the words
To bring you a sunny day
I know not what it is
That has made your day look grey
I hope that soon it will go away

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (01-16-2003 04:38 PM).]

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2003-01-16 04:31 PM

Don't we all wish we could wash away the pain of those we love. Nice thoughts.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-16 04:41 PM

Yes, I like these thoughts you have in this poem...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2003-01-16 04:42 PM

sweet...helen

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