Open Poetry #24 |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
Eliza wrote in volumes spiracle voluminous tallies of pro, and con as her writing threatened, lyrical, the future she had spent her time upon. A rumbled chant of woe to come from the threatening voice of man ~ but she would block it with her hum, her muse and she had plans. So by dark of dimming light gentle scratch of pen was heard, soon she’d blink in softest light, and would review her every word. Truth, she wrote, the dreadful facts of loss and heartbreak’s edge, and lest his eyes view blackest tracks the papers were ripped in shreds. She told her muse, who shook her head, “You know it could be worse, for him to view what lays ahead, if he were to read this verse.” For love was gone, it had long died, though still its spirit roamed, no exorcise for it, it cried, and it haunted the rooms called home. Eliza wrote with passionate pleas till her muse was all that remained for love’s spirit, who found no ease did not long to stay there in pain. Eliza wrote in volumes spiracle voluminous tallies of pro, and con as her writing threatened, lyrical, the future she had spent her time upon. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-16-2003 02:23 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful !!!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent I often wonder if I offered up my words to those I write about, how would they receive them? |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
ENJOYED!! ~~ Hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i can relate to this poem. any poem that i can relate to, i almost-always fall in love with. sp yeah, youve got me swooning. good job. |
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