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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-01-16 08:42 AM


I had to go, I could not stay
I could not watch you            walk away.
Thoughts to surround myself with friends,
but it didn't help, the pain won't end.

Now I sit here alone to break the feel
but it doesn't work, it's just to real.
Even the noise doesn't drown the pain
so please tell me....what did you gain?

Did you gain your freedom,
do you believe that's true,
then why are you acting so blue?

Even now I feel sorry for you
losing yourself, you'll pay your dues.
I still love you even though this heart aches...
but this time........ I refuse to break.....


I breathe in, I breathe out, put one foot in front of the other,
take one day at a time....(sung by Chris Kegle)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-16-2003 01:09 PM).]

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GG
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1 posted 2003-01-16 08:47 AM


it hurts so much to see friends do things that hurt them and others.
A dull ache of loneliness comes when you know they don't understand..
and you don't understand either *sigh*
I enjoyed this. Though it hurts a bit.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-16 08:56 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Donna, this is so heartbreaking, I miss the Joanna I fell in love with so much, now I feel she has changed and forgotten all she used to be! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-01-16 09:00 AM


Wish you were closer so I could give you a big hug!
You sound so sad Donna...chin up sweetie.
Thing will get better.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Toerag
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4 posted 2003-01-16 09:10 AM


Wish you were closer so I could give you a big hug, (and several other things).....
Krystopher Morris
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5 posted 2003-01-16 09:17 AM


This poem is inspiringly Beautiful! I acctually see what it's about. I guess that means I understand the meaning in a way. Thanks for sharing this magnificent write.

Poetry is love and love is life.

SmartChick
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6 posted 2003-01-16 09:20 AM


Oh Donna you sound so sad. I am sending you a hug . Hope it will atleast help.
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2003-01-16 09:25 AM



Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-01-16 09:26 AM


Donna,
A sad poem but a good write, enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-01-16 01:48 PM


I am still around if you need a voice or someone to listen

hugsss
M

Eliza
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10 posted 2003-01-16 01:53 PM



Keep writing,
young friend...
keep writing.

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-01-16 03:42 PM






                   


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-16-2003 03:44 PM).]

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2003-01-16 07:27 PM


Gentle Spirit - be sure of keeping that gentle smile I see in your photo, best to you...

BC

vandana
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13 posted 2003-01-16 07:32 PM


enjoyed this
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2003-01-16 07:46 PM


With time comes answers, and
with time......comes healing...

thank you all dear friends, for your support it has meant much to me........

ShadowRider
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15 posted 2003-01-16 09:09 PM


You, dear Donna, are a stew
bubbling with goodness, and its difficult
to find a reason why love would ever abandon
someone with such a wonderful spirit.
Amazing flow, nonetheless, ~D~,
and i wish you find the end of a rainbow
soon. *s*
JkF

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