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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I had to go, I could not stay I could not watch you walk away. Thoughts to surround myself with friends, but it didn't help, the pain won't end. Now I sit here alone to break the feel but it doesn't work, it's just to real. Even the noise doesn't drown the pain so please tell me....what did you gain? Did you gain your freedom, do you believe that's true, then why are you acting so blue? Even now I feel sorry for you losing yourself, you'll pay your dues. I still love you even though this heart aches... but this time........ I refuse to break..... I breathe in, I breathe out, put one foot in front of the other, take one day at a time....(sung by Chris Kegle) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-16-2003 01:09 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
it hurts so much to see friends do things that hurt them and others. A dull ache of loneliness comes when you know they don't understand.. and you don't understand either *sigh* I enjoyed this. Though it hurts a bit. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Donna, this is so heartbreaking, I miss the Joanna I fell in love with so much, now I feel she has changed and forgotten all she used to be! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wish you were closer so I could give you a big hug! You sound so sad Donna...chin up sweetie. Thing will get better. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Wish you were closer so I could give you a big hug, (and several other things)..... |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
This poem is inspiringly Beautiful! I acctually see what it's about. I guess that means I understand the meaning in a way. Thanks for sharing this magnificent write. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Donna you sound so sad. I am sending you a hug  . Hope it will atleast help. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Donna, A sad poem but a good write, enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am still around if you need a voice or someone to listen hugsss M |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
Keep writing, young friend... keep writing. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-16-2003 03:44 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - be sure of keeping that gentle smile I see in your photo, best to you... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
With time comes answers, and with time......comes healing... thank you all dear friends, for your support it has meant much to me........ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
You, dear Donna, are a stew bubbling with goodness, and its difficult to find a reason why love would ever abandon someone with such a wonderful spirit. Amazing flow, nonetheless, ~D~, and i wish you find the end of a rainbow soon. *s* JkF |
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