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Open Poetry #24

The Hours (twenty or less)

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-01-16 04:27 AM

Folds of night and day
with skies so vast
clouded by the past
time at play
as all await.

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-16 04:38 AM

seems sort of unfair...

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2003-01-16 05:01 AM

Perhaps a bit cheated ...
   but isn't that how most feel about time?

     "For forever blends
      seconds held fast
      eternity's cast
      neverends
      my timeless state"

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2003-01-16 06:39 AM

hi ctowen,
what i got from your poem: time is mocking us for being at a standstill since we are trapped in our painful past...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-01-16 06:44 AM

seems like the better moments slip away faster, while the harder ones stick

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