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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-01-16 12:09 PM

Sitting smugly,
Oddly comfortable
In the midst of a life
Littered
With bits of broken trust

Piled high
With the detritus
Of false starts
And truncated promise

He ignores the rot
And wonders, why
He is alone

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-01-16 12:12 PM

Piled high
With the detritus
Of false starts
And truncated promise

These words run deep for me. Excellent...keep them coming

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-16-2003 12:13 AM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-01-16 12:34 PM

All of these touch beyond the obvious.

Yer writing wisdom Ed.

(which is why I went nuts with the links...
I wan't to read your views on ALL of it.)

You inspire me and make me smile.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-01-16 01:19 AM

It seems the cold air stirs the deepest cauldrons of your mind.
I plead limited ignorance of that sinful list you speak of so eloquently.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-01-16 06:49 AM

this really penetrates and chills, like watching the movie 7 again, getting all bugged out; thanks, i think, but im not reading these increments anymore, while im alone in this dark dreary basement late at night

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-01-16 10:11 AM

I do wish at times we could talk about this stuff. The type can be maddening, (so hard to project tone)

I am sending warm wishes your way, so you'll be around more. (selfish lil witch, ain't I?)

But oh man, there's so many forms of sloth.
WARNING: Brain Cells Have Been Activated

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-01-16 10:13 AM

LOL at Serenity's brain cell activation. Java is amazing stuff, isn't it?
Ed, I have to admit, this one made me come back for a second cup of you.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2003-01-16 10:59 AM

The concise accuracy of the words you choose for description amaze me. Do ya bowl this well too?

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2003-01-16 11:08 AM

None so blind as those who will not see..thought provoking..

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-01-16 12:15 PM

Ed, I don't even know how to tell you all the thoughts this series is bringing to my mind. It's probably for the best, anyway. I really don't want to tell the whole internet all about my past, to tell you the truth.

Let's just say that your thoughts are making me think...think...think...

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

10 posted 2003-01-17 04:07 PM

Ignorance is not
bliss...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-01-17 04:11 PM

I love pieces like this that make me think...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

12 posted 2003-01-17 04:16 PM

Sloth as apathy.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

13 posted 2003-01-17 05:21 PM

Aren't most of the Cardinals sweet on choir boys these days?

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