Open Poetry #24 |
I need to sleep |
rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
It could be worse But that doesn’t stop it hurting And the worst of it all Is that I don’t even know Why it hurts so bad Why I’m broken So badly broken And the pieces are scattered I’ve lost what made me myself That’s what I lived for No matter what I have to keep smiling For all the people who matter It matters to me That they don’t know I hurt I don’t want to be trouble I don’t want concern I don’t know what I want anymore I just need to get away for a moment To the places of my dreams Where my pain is numbed By the power of my imagination And where I’m in control Because right now I need to sleep. small insignificant useless me |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
no one is small or insignificant...i want you to know that...great write Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Great write, touching. " This will pass to, with time.." |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I think you should let people know how you feel, un resolved feelings tend to become acid with time...they eat away at everything until nothing is left but rust.....Jewell said her hands were small, they're not yours, they are my own, no one is small or useless, keep writing, it helps. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree with all of the above here...keep writing it all out! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
rm711, if you need to sleep then do so, but ware the dreams. When you wake write it out again until the pain is all gone. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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