Open Poetry #24 |
......creating monsters...... |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sometimes I think that we spend more time worrying about and agonizing over the crumbling skeletons tucked away in our closets, than the monsters we just might be creating in the here and now. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chris B. 2002 ~~~~~~~~ |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Well written and very true. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent thought here Chris! How very very true... At the moment I don't have much room for anything...let alone skeletons.. so better not create more until I make room. Good write! ~Hugs and miss ya! Teed~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Chris, lots and lots of wisdom here. Now, how do you propose we get rid of them? I say we put them on a spaceship and send them packing. Huggles, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Boy ... a TON to think about in just a very little bit of text ... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ada - thankyou for reading and commenting. Nancylee - Oh, take a tea break!! Slow down, you're movin' too fast...la la laaa. hugs! Marti - good idea!! thanks for signing dear lady. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lonely - thinking is good....at times...lol. Maybe all the freezing the dentist gave me to-day has brought forth deep thoughts...ha ha ha...ya right. Thankyou!! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Chris, Now that's thought provoking!!! could it be that we create those monsters by trying to keep the skeletons tucked away? HMMM.... (whispering to Nancy.... how could you run out of room in that big stone house???) Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Love this brain tweeker, Chris. Peace, sister poet. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, I like this thought provoking poem. I tend to think like Sherry said in her comment, though........ How will we get read of the skeletons and heal from the hurts if we don't first face up to the fact that they're there? I, personally, have pushed those skeletons back so far that I can't seem to get complete healing from my past hurts....and some are very bad and need to be gone completely. I'll think that I've dealt with them and threw them away, only to be reminded of them again....then they resurface in my mind. Is there such a thing as a "mind transplant"?? HaHa!!!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
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Sherry - you bring up a good point!! Thanks for commenting. Midnitesun - I am pleased that you stopped by to read and comment. hugs!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahhh dear Ethel, that is why we call them "skeletons".. they will eventually crumble to dust and we CAN sweep them away. For some reason, we are still wary of them though. Thankyou. |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
short, complex and in your face truthful....clapping like mad! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
e-vamp - thankyou for your comments. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This is certainly something I'll ponder over a shot of whiskey, Chris..best way to deal with monsters.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
scorpio - have one for me!! thanks. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Chris, wise words from a dear heart. Relate toooo well to them. Thanx. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - awww, thankyou for your comments dear poet. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nightshade - very true Chris, very true... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hello Bill !! Thanks for reading and commenting on my thoughts. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is wonderful. So insightful. Enjoyed this bit of wisdom. Thank you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Pat - thankyou so much!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) I think I do too, yet I remain optimistic even with the new heartbreak I have and all the wraiths, skeletons, and eight-legged rats creeping in my minds attic! (sad sigh) This is deeply poignant, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww sweet Noah, don't let those awful thoughts and/or memories fill your closet.Sweep them away and start anew. Thankyou dear one. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
true, very true! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
passing shadows - Thanks so much for reading and commenting. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that is scary to think of....very good advice, to let go of the past and pay attention to the here and now |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi SEA!!! Yes, what's past is past. But, we tend to dwell on it anyway. I'm trying my best to change that habit. thankyou dear poetess for taking the time to read and comment. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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