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Open Poetry #24

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-13 01:16 PM

Touching

he touched
the center
of me
with
his heart
exposing
my edge

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-13 01:19 PM

ah.. very nicely done... very nice indeed.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-01-13 08:04 PM

helen - and a very nice edge it is...

BC

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-13 08:12 PM

Helen, this is very pretty...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

gypsy girl
Junior Member

since 2003-01-09

Posts 12
Pennsylvania, USA

4 posted 2003-01-13 08:19 PM

Lovely...so much spoken in so few lines

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-01-14 02:21 AM

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

6 posted 2003-01-14 05:10 AM

My favorite poems are the ones with the fewest lines that say the most....and you my friend have nailed it....enjoyed this so much I have to read it again.

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

7 posted 2003-02-04 02:26 PM

wow......great job.....in less than 20 words too.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-02-04 03:06 PM

complete, and a completely beautiful presentation

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-02-05 06:55 PM

enjoyed

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

10 posted 2003-02-05 09:24 PM

good job and good poem

andrea

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