Open Poetry #24 |
Unfinished Story |
quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
Dreams never finished They often tell a fairy tail Dreams can be astonishing Through light of heaven And darkness of hell They begin with dragons and knights Swords and fights But they also can be about little girls in the forest And wolves that hunt in the night Fantasies of all sorts that bunch up into one big ball And all of great things is the best of them all Stories still untold They wait for the right time They began to unfold Trying on the same line And when the storie ends Its often a big suprise Sometimes i like to read the story again I always seem to compromise The End |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
quik, I like the way you read and learn, as I read and learn from your poetry. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Nice! "If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stories sometimes never end...yes |
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