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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-01-12 11:00 PM

It was not my intention
to come-hither without warning
I was careless in passing
crossing over the line.

How reckless I was
to be batting my eyes
without taking caution
seems my vision went blind.

I have no excuses
to fain or disguise
I'm numb to the pain
without a claim to remise.

I've no one to blame
the mistake was all mine
crashing and burning
misleading myself.

I should learn to slow down
when the bridge starts to narrow
paying heed to the warnings
and look out below.

In time I'll recover
from this sudden windfall
and straighten out my wrong turns
to avoid hitting the wall.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-01-12 11:03 PM

WOW!! Fantastic write Lori!
Enjoyed the read...
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-01-12 11:19 PM

Aww Nancy you've got such a big heart,
thank you for the nice comments.
I'm not feeling too fantastic right about
now, the truth is, I'm thinking
I should be checking myself in and get some help!

Hugs to you sweet one~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-12-2003 11:21 PM).]

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2003-01-13 01:22 AM

We can't help ourselves. However how else would we know were we not to venture? Understood and enjoyed.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2003-01-13 02:44 AM

BluesSerenade~ Love can be blind as some say.
Many times it can lead you astray.
Take care and trust your heart to lead the way.
For true love will always stay
Enjoyed...Paul

neveah5
Member

since 2002-11-22

Posts 197
Ohio

5 posted 2003-01-13 02:50 AM

This is written so well..I've been experiencing this and have tried to write about it but it just gets so jumbled..my thoughts are so mixed up about it. Thank you for sharing

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

6 posted 2003-01-13 03:02 AM

I enjoyed this piece very much, looking forawrd to maore of your work.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-01-13 04:32 AM

nothin' wrong with reckless...bat your eyes all you want!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-01-13 06:46 AM

thats the feeling when you fall in head first, or is it heart first, or whatever it is, thats the feeling, but the feeling is just sooooooooo good, (at first at least) what can you do?

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-01-13 08:03 AM

ah.... hugs for the pain....

enjoyed as usual my friend...your style and talent at expressing yourself..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-01-13 09:15 AM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Lori, I know just what you mean, I'm not crazy, I'm just lacking focus and I can't help but steer poorly with the tears welling in my eyes! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

11 posted 2003-01-13 03:36 PM

I always enjoy your take of all the things we so often face, and sometimes ignore.

Most creative expressions from you. *S*
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

12 posted 2003-01-13 06:36 PM

I may be wrong, but this doesn't sound "reckless". Sounds more trusting, not always a bad thing.

Ed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-01-13 06:59 PM

Lori, I've run quite a few "caution lights", where life is concerned, too.....
I know exactly what you're saying...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

14 posted 2003-01-13 10:17 PM

Yes, crossing over that line...even though we know better...temptation gets the best of our good sense....

Hugs to you,

and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

15 posted 2003-01-13 11:12 PM

BluesSerenade,

How is one ever to know unless we take risks. Yes, sometimes we stumble and sometimes we fall but, sometimes we discover much about ourselves as a result. I ejoyed this read very much. I especially like the flow and the pattern. Good thoughts to ponder.

SG

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2003-01-13 11:57 PM

It's nice to have company when I'm feeling
lost.
Thank you all for watching out for me,
it makes it so much easier to find my way back!

It means a lot to me~

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