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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Find me on the porch beneath the stars Spaghetti strapped silk, wool socks and a scarf Under cover of billowing quilts I await you Explicated in the giggles saunter your adventures of the day The interesting parts of us that are different pour forth like wine And we sip together into sacred spaces where we are one Find me in the twinkling of this moment bound in silence As I approach your unsheltered side, warming you within me Telling you in the language of sweet cider pouring from my lips In waltz we seek the fireside, to paint with puddings, love designs Apart to play together, in this hide and seek of whispering hearts Speaking with these eyes in pools that sparkle with the want of you Find me soft beneath your weight and muscled strength as we take flight And take this silk, and take these smiles, and join with me in the full of air For all that is not, succumbs to so much that is…as we dance in the magic By the afterglow find me, beside you nibbled ice cream from a single spoon Red wine sips that toast this elegant relation…this one we make together Find me deep inside your heart, a molten pool that cannot sleep unspoken Find me here Copyright Kkh 1/12/03 |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
An absolute masterpiece! So beautiful. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I like! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beyond question, without reservation... Truly one of your finest...by far. So many exceptional metaphors...a lover's poem that withstands the ages, to be remembered always... This dude, surely he is blessed to have such words written. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
filled with all the sweet images of being in love, where everything seems to sing, loved this |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
cleverly written with playful, romantic frivolity. The pleasant and articulate construction of the phrases are some of the best I have seen in you...and the subject matter is delightful as well! JkF |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was absolutely fantastic! really,I mean it! I am living proof that ghosts exist. Which is an oximoron but I don't care ;) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) This is so lovely, sweet friend, your lovely words always deeply touch my heart and make me cry hoping maybe someday I will have true love! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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