Open Poetry #24 |
Your Eyes |
scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your Eyes In the quiet dark When moon reflects in your eyes I seek your essence.. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by Enchantress (01-12-2003 09:36 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
seeing the moon in his eyes, what else is there? very pretty poem |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I swear... this was a weep of scent... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Scorpio, Ah, so lovely and so loving. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
There is nothing better,inkedgoddess...the glow from moonlight is unsurpassed...thank you.. Karilea...that's a beautiful phrase "weep of scent"...thank you for your read.. Thank you, Pat...I'm glad you stopped by...your comments were appreciated.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful. Just beautiful. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
I love the moon, especially when reflected in those special eyes--beautiful!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the glow within you reflected by the moonbeams captivates my eyes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Scorpio, enjoyed the soft moonlit passion of this..Much truth in your thoughts. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Serenity...Glad you liked it.. Yes the moon reflection looks so beautiful in my love's eyes...thank you, Sandpiper.. Exactly, Midnightsun...you've seen it too.. Thank you, Barry...your comments are very much appreciated.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, such beauty in so few words...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you,Ethel...I do enjoy writing these senyrus...the challenge for me is counting the syllables..I should have paid more attention in grade three!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Scorpio...you are becoming an expert with this style. Sounds as though your love's eyes are quite beautiful.. And I am sure her essence pleasures you! Well done and much enjoyed! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes Nancy, she has the eyes of an angel...bright, all seeing and sparkling...everything about her pleasures me...your encouragement and support means so very much to me...you do inspire me with your creativity and talent...thank you sweet Enchantress.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I wish for loves tears of crystal joy to always fall from your eyes gazing into your sweethearts world! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Noah...your support and friendship mean a great deal to me.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
scorpio - few words, meaningful thoughts. Very nice write... BC |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Bill...glad you enjoyed it.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is truly lovely scorpio. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Chris...thank you for stopping by...nice to see you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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