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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-01-12 08:14 AM

Upon the Wind

I hear the meadows calling me.
The dancing breeze and greenery
The butterflies that hover there
The colors that the flowers bare

It comes to me each day it seems.
In wakefulness and in my dreams
It whispers in a spirits dwell.
A feeling that I cannot quell

It takes my hand and leads my soul.
Beyond the real abyss of toll
On to a road of love and bliss
And all of this by mental kiss

Who would not pray, sign a lease?
A garden with a stay of peace
A promised land with sun and friend
A paradox with happy end

So if you hear the meadows call.
Wrap it round you like a shawl.

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

1 posted 2003-01-12 08:22 AM

Absolutely brilliant. I know that place. You write it perfectly.

... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-12 08:25 AM

I'll greet you at the sunrise...
hurry, Sy...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-01-12 08:42 AM

will it be everlasting for us one day? when we leave this wretched place.....
liked this

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-01-12 08:52 AM

Sounds beautiful Sy..take my hand and lead the way!

~Morning hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-01-12 09:23 AM

Table for two...no veggies....

Like this SY...excellent...very tranquil.
Can I borrow the garden??

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2003-01-12 09:27 AM

Sy,

"and all of this by mental kiss"

Positive thinking at it's finest. I like this a great deal. Imagination one of the greatest gifts we've been given and I thank you for sharing yours with us. This is rich.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-01-12 09:28 AM

You've convinced me - I'm on my way...

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

8 posted 2003-01-12 10:00 AM

a soft and gentle morning sigh--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

9 posted 2003-01-12 10:03 AM

What a beautiful pastoral piece, Sy...the images flow straight to my mind...I'll co-sign the lease with you..

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-01-12 10:10 AM

The Lonely Stranger
Thank you, I'm glad you know the place.

Sunshine
I'll be there.

inkedgoddess
I hope so, but we should work with what we have.

Enchantress
I'll take your hand and we'll have tea.

Magnus
You have a reservation.

Pat,
And we all have the gift.

Nan,
I'll be waiting when you get here.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-01-12 10:11 AM

Sounds like Heaven to me, Mr. Seymour.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-01-12 10:11 AM

scorpio
Glad to have you as a neighbor.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2003-01-12 01:30 PM

It takes my hand and leads my soul.
Beyond the real abyss of toll
On to a road of love and bliss
And all of this by mental kiss

Who would not pray, sign a lease?
A garden with a stay of peace
A promised land with sun and friend
A paradox with happy end

So if you hear the meadows call.
Wrap it round you like a shawl.
=====================================

could you be any cooler?

And all of this by mental kiss

Who would not pray, sign a lease?
A garden with a stay of peace
~~~~

Many, many times I have left this weary world behind ...
to wander the glorious gardens of your mind.
Who could resist the verdant verses of your green,
we wish to exist in your rhyme scheme dreams.

In your Eden's escape there grows a rose ...
buds bursting in the beauty of your rhymed repose.

~~

consider this a mental kiss *L*

*ww*

It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe.
Trying to see where it all began, she'll never be the same again.

angelfriend
Member

since 2003-01-11

Posts 52
Michigan USA

14 posted 2003-01-12 02:16 PM

Definitely I agree - a nice place to be. Thanks for sharing your vision with us.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

15 posted 2003-01-12 02:56 PM

Ah...you've got me longing for spring

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2003-01-12 05:30 PM

JM,
I'll take your mental kiss and up you two.
Thank you Tink, It is wonderful to have you well again. WWRS

angelfriend
Thank you for reading and replying.

hoot,
How are you dear, missed you. :queeze:

bluRaven
Junior Member

since 2003-01-08

Posts 18
Richmond, VA

17 posted 2003-01-12 05:40 PM

so very very lovely
luvs!~~

"~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

18 posted 2003-01-12 06:02 PM

Yes, this was a beautiful breath of fresh air. So glad I stopped along your road of bliss. What lovely wonderful images. Thank you.

SimplyGold

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

19 posted 2003-01-12 07:08 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sparkling and enshroud us like the shawl a mother shares with her child in the winter! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

20 posted 2003-01-12 07:32 PM

bluRaven
Thank you for the lovely.

SimplyGold
Thank you for the read and reply.

Noah,
Always a nice comment from you.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

21 posted 2003-01-12 07:45 PM

enjoyed

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

22 posted 2003-01-12 08:03 PM

I am all wrapped up and snuggly.

Sy, you know I love all your poems, but this one nearly took my breath away. It is just brilliant. A piece worth reading over and over.

WOW!!!! Hugs, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2003-01-12 09:00 PM

vandana
Thank you for the read and reply.

Marti,
Enjoyed writing it, thank you.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

24 posted 2003-01-12 10:21 PM

Seymour...Enjoyed very much...Paul

Tis a beautiful place you write of
This wonderful place filled with peace and love

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

25 posted 2003-01-12 11:25 PM

Paul,
Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the reply.

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