Open Poetry #24 |
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Upon the Wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Upon the Wind I hear the meadows calling me. The dancing breeze and greenery The butterflies that hover there The colors that the flowers bare It comes to me each day it seems. In wakefulness and in my dreams It whispers in a spirits dwell. A feeling that I cannot quell It takes my hand and leads my soul. Beyond the real abyss of toll On to a road of love and bliss And all of this by mental kiss Who would not pray, sign a lease? A garden with a stay of peace A promised land with sun and friend A paradox with happy end So if you hear the meadows call. Wrap it round you like a shawl. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Absolutely brilliant. I know that place. You write it perfectly. ... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll greet you at the sunrise... hurry, Sy... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
will it be everlasting for us one day? when we leave this wretched place..... liked this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sounds beautiful Sy..take my hand and lead the way! ![]() ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Table for two...no veggies.... Like this SY...excellent...very tranquil. Can I borrow the garden?? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, "and all of this by mental kiss" Positive thinking at it's finest. I like this a great deal. Imagination one of the greatest gifts we've been given and I thank you for sharing yours with us. This is rich. Warm regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've convinced me - I'm on my way... ![]() |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
a soft and gentle morning sigh--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
What a beautiful pastoral piece, Sy...the images flow straight to my mind...I'll co-sign the lease with you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Lonely Stranger Thank you, I'm glad you know the place. Sunshine I'll be there. ![]() inkedgoddess I hope so, but we should work with what we have. ![]() Enchantress I'll take your hand and we'll have tea. Magnus You have a reservation. Pat, And we all have the gift. Nan, I'll be waiting when you get here. ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sounds like Heaven to me, Mr. Seymour..... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Glad to have you as a neighbor. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It takes my hand and leads my soul. Beyond the real abyss of toll On to a road of love and bliss And all of this by mental kiss Who would not pray, sign a lease? A garden with a stay of peace A promised land with sun and friend A paradox with happy end So if you hear the meadows call. Wrap it round you like a shawl. ===================================== could you be any cooler? And all of this by mental kiss Who would not pray, sign a lease? A garden with a stay of peace ~~~~ Many, many times I have left this weary world behind ... to wander the glorious gardens of your mind. Who could resist the verdant verses of your green, we wish to exist in your rhyme scheme dreams. In your Eden's escape there grows a rose ... buds bursting in the beauty of your rhymed repose. ~~ consider this a mental kiss *L* ![]() *ww* ![]() ![]() ![]() It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe. |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
Definitely I agree - a nice place to be. Thanks for sharing your vision with us. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...you've got me longing for spring ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll take your mental kiss and up you two. Thank you Tink, It is wonderful to have you well again. WWRS ![]() ![]() ![]() angelfriend Thank you for reading and replying. hoot, How are you dear, missed you. :queeze: |
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bluRaven Junior Member
since 2003-01-08
Posts 18Richmond, VA |
so very very lovely luvs!~~ "~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~ |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, this was a beautiful breath of fresh air. So glad I stopped along your road of bliss. What lovely wonderful images. Thank you. SimplyGold |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sparkling and enshroud us like the shawl a mother shares with her child in the winter! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bluRaven Thank you for the lovely. SimplyGold Thank you for the read and reply. Noah, Always a nice comment from you. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I am all wrapped up and snuggly. Sy, you know I love all your poems, but this one nearly took my breath away. It is just brilliant. A piece worth reading over and over. WOW!!!! Hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you for the read and reply. Marti, Enjoyed writing it, thank you. |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Enjoyed very much...Paul Tis a beautiful place you write of This wonderful place filled with peace and love "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the reply. |
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