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Open Poetry #24

spring of 47

wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2002-12-17 10:18 PM

*tried this on teen postings but ya no one read it i thought it was alright...not my best work but thought it would get the attention needed on this posting...thanks*
"Do your feet hurt?"
"No, they don't" Wow this guy is an idiot
"Well you have been running through my head all day"
He thinks he is just a stud

She turns away, whats their problem?
Why do guys always hit on me?
She dreams of her knight in shining armor
Lame huh, it will never come true

Ouch, that put a spin on his world
Never in his life has he been turned away
That girl was beutiful he thought
maybe he needs to brush up on his pick up lines

She walks home wondering what girl fell for that guy
oddly enough she couldn't get him off her mind
She remembered his face, his blue eyes
dirty blonde hair you just wanted to run your
fingers through

He still can't brush it off
She was amazing, her grace and carelessness
she reminded him of a southern belle
The way they were in the movies, charming

She had to find out who he was
maybe she was wrong to brush him off
his smile, whenever she closed her eyes
his face was their

He had to go, he couldn't stand it
The bar seemed to dull, if only she was there
He left in such a hurry, he needed her
he didn't know why

she reached her doorstep,fumbuling for her keys
man, she thought this wasen't like her
Her mind was on him
She turned around, headed once more for the bar

In one moment their lives collided
He ran into her, he found out where she lived
He helped her up, not glancing at her face
Then their eyes locked

Their lives have been blissfull
Every since that fatefull day
When love brought them together in
The spring of 47

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-12-18 01:59 AM

Nice love story. I like the way you meandered back and forth between the minds of these two lovers, and tied them together with a very long time line.

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