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A Master Of Disguise
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A Master Of Disguise |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * I thought you were the one When we started our romance Your love to me meant everything But you never gave us a chance I failed to see the lies That lay hidden within your eyes As you played your selfish game You were a master of disguise You told me that you loved me That you'd be faithful, warm and true But now I've seen your truest colors And there's no way I can trust you You played your part so well Like an actor on the stage Now your masquerade is over As I now turn another page * * * * This was written as pure fiction, not about me or anyone else I know. I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, I do that from time to time also...write of something that is not present... as well as something that may not have happened...though often times it has at one point or another... Bitter feelings of hurt and pain...the betrayal.... Written very well.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! Sue, you surely have a creative imagination. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl, this speaks so clearly of a memory that needs to wrapped and kept away less it hurt the soul. Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful, when you write using your imagination you excel. There was a time, very long ago when this would have applied to me, and you’ve written it beautifully Somewhere in time there waits a sigh Waiting softly for its last goodbye The heart that sits and watches silently Wishes for a vision with some clarity But while heart’s memory lingers on There’s no chance of hearing love’s sweet song The memory keeps you locked inside And your heart seeks a place to hide Open your soul let the memory fade And you’ll walk in sunshine not in shade I love this utterly utterly utterly as always YOUR writing is simply perfect   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes...there are many who work to master this "skill" and when one gets burned by such it not only can be very painful, but also life changing.. nice work... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, I'm so glad this is only fictional to you, though it saddens me to see so many others truly being deceived with this sleight of hand! (sad sigh) You say this so well, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to all who need the strength these holidays, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Very moving poem and I'm glad it is fiction and has nothing to do with your life! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your comments and wishing you much joy throughout Chrismas and the New Year. Marsha, you always humble me with your beautiful verses and I thank you sincerely. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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