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Evolution?? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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He speaks and I swear it takes all my reserve not to reach over the table and choke him Blood may be thicker than wine but his head is thicker than all Darwin's theories personified I cringe at the thought that I am descended from his aped logic |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
take a deep breath,,,,,,,, send me all your vampires............. ...........3rd eye blind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe, I'm giggling, and sorry, but this, on the outside looking in, is so much like what my brothers felt for my father. We had many fights over the dinner table...I was about 8 when dad threw a piece of bread up, and it stuck to the ceiling, butter side up...and after just long enough to gain composure, it came down, right onto his head, butter side down. I think I must have cracked a rib that day, because it still hurts now, as I'm remembering, trying to type this out with tears streaming...I can't stop... [This message has been edited by passing shadows (12-18-2002 01:48 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Does cringing help? Darwin never factored in the evolution of human emotions. LOL at passing shadows reply. Think I've seen that buttered bread routine. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling).. serious I know...but the humor in having been there done that is just too much for me to not laugh. Laughing was the way I ended up dealing with it... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
lol... Good poem... And some what of a good topic? lol. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal Interesting write, enjoyed. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Made me picture Inspector Clueseau and his former boss the Chief Inspector... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Inked I'll just send him to you, he's the uber-vampire Lol passing, no problem it is funny at times, you know when the dust settles my brothers and i make fun of him Kacy no it doesn't, I once had to leave his place in the middle of lunch, just got up and on a bus went across town just to clear my head. We weren't even arguing he was just sharing his thoughts on the different kinds of house paint Cpat trust me thats the only way to get through it Connel just on my mind as christmas approaches Seymour thanks appreciate the kind words Mark except Clueseau was loveable when he did that stuff. A shot In the Dark is the best of the of Clueseau, before the Pink Panther theme raph |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yea it seems that some people havent quite fully evolved out of the whole neanderthal thing. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Eagle i agree it's a wonder we're walking upright sometimes raph |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Let's put him and my ex husband in a room together. We can hang them from the monkey bars and let em have at it. I like this ~Salty |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
this is crazy. i love the randomness of the words, ::speechless:: **** [*****] four out of five. -chris. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i have to say,i love the things you share with us. the way you can describe. i really do enjoy reading your poetry raph. it's full of emotion and deep thought. the expression you use is outstanding. thanks. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
hehehe NEAT. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Salty as long as the room is far away from here Thanks chris, for the high rating lol gemma that's so sweet thank you , you made my day Thanks GOID appreciate it |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
smiling, whoaaaaaa, i'm not sure who is, but the description is out there for all to see, good job~ Indeed~! ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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