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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-10 10:12 PM

a gull appearing on the sky,
a crescent moon smiling
before the sun goes down,
a fresh colored leaf
taken
by the wind passing by,
a hint of Spring,
barely coloring winters grey,
butterflies fluttering by,
haze on the window
before the coming rain,
a suddenly dark sky
on a picture perfect day,
moonlight dancing across the
black night sea,
the sun,the moon, the stars, the sky
synchronious bliss,
a tap, a sigh, a wisp, an echo,
something trancending thought,
felt deeply inside,
total awareness,
nothing else matters,
there is only this,
right now,
a mother feels life,
the very first time

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-10-2003 10:32 PM).]

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-01-10 10:17 PM

achingly beautiful words

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-10 10:30 PM

inkedgoddess, this is really beautiful. You are a very good writer......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-01-10 10:33 PM

inkedgoddess - a'hhhh, right from that soft heart I know you have...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-11 02:13 PM

yeah!

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

5 posted 2003-01-11 02:18 PM

"a fresh colored leaf
taken
by the wind passing by"

What a wonderful passage in a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing with us.

... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-01-11 04:32 PM

a tap, a sigh, a wisp, an echo,

It feels just like that doesn't it...you described the miracle of life so well!!

Nice Ink~

*applause*

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2003-01-11 10:41 PM

Really nice poem. I am so glad you share it with us......

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