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Watch Out Northern Lights |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A trip in trail of icy air the contrail streaks here to there. A sister waits with raisey eyes. Come on there Sis, bring no surprise. She scurried not in prim and crop. Her routine she just didn’t stop. No doting signs were posted where she brushed her teeth, and combed her hair. A routine dame, a common girl Nothing special, give her a whirl. The candle that she could not hold The two of them, not aged or old. Organize, energize, two words. ‘Nuff to drive away cawing birds. For two of them just took over Grand Rapids, run, duck for cover. To bake and shake a brownie treat one would cook all things so neat. The popcorn shared in whispered munch Man oh man, they sure ate a bunch. Amanda whirled around the room on her mother’s long whisking broom. A trail of shrieks and laughter’s cries from twinkle feet and raisey eyes. True friends these two sisters glowing as they ducked from snowball throwing A trek of air for one’s arrive.. Now we shall see who does survive. (For 3 girls...who are having a ball being together) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a wonderful tale you treat us with this evening Magnus!! Thankyou. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Sounds like my slumber parties I use to go to....and we had plenty. Lots of fun stuff going on. But then I suppose you see this every day..how cool is that? Loved the read and your take on this Magnus. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. --Deepak Chop [This message has been edited by Salty (01-09-2003 10:43 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Way cool write Magnum...I mean...Magnus, Barry, Sir...  Love it! ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for sharing tonight...love this story! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooooooo beautiful, it alwyas makes me cry to think of children being loved and close to loving parents and you are what makes them glow like the lights! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Beautifully written adventures in childhood... sounds fun! ENJOYED! aloooooha, Cher Poetry is: |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
effervescent imaging throughout! Enjoyed! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah nicely done...very nicely done... I'm sure they are having a ball... and you as well watching them..... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Party time... Sounds like a grand time is being had by all...  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yeah, Barry. I don't have any sisters,but lots of cousins and friends....we used to giggle at night until my Mom or Dad would make us go to sleep. I don't know what in the world we thought was so funny, but we were so carefree back then.... Good memories this poem brought back, Sir.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at this swirl and twirl snapshot. Somebody is having my share of fun!  |
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