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Open Poetry #24

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neveah5
Member

since 2002-11-22

Posts 197
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-09 08:07 PM

I'm thirsty
thirsty for the
feeling you aways gave me

I'm drowning
drowning in the words
that i wish you would say

I'm losing
losing every sense of
a reality that once consumed me

I'm yearning
yearning for what I know
is dangerous for my heart and mind

I'm mourning
mourning for something
that is there but I cannot grasp

I'm forgeting
forgeting what I know
is what truly makes me happy

I'm almost gone now...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-01-09 08:24 PM

Creatively spelled out...emotive write.
ThisDiamond

raleighbttrfly
Member

since 2000-11-21

Posts 160
Raleigh NC

2 posted 2003-01-09 08:32 PM

very clevar form. i can remember feeling like that ahhh

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-10 03:02 AM

well done! Loved this, and can relate!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-01-10 08:42 PM

dont u just hate losing control?
good poem, i can relate

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2003-01-10 08:52 PM

enjoy

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