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An afterlife
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An afterlife |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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After the over is over and under -- the over and under is under and over -- we're over and under the over and under. *  See? No confusion.[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (01-09-2003 01:27 PM).] |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I get it and I like it.  Sunkissed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
That is an under and overstatement if I ever heard one! Sorry, couldn't resist... I read your poetry, but I usually don't reply for more often than not I don't understand it. But, I do like what you do with words...interesting! warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Here's a breakdown. I was just in a good mood spiked with a bit of silliness, so used the same words over and over to try and mean different things. After the over is over and under After death is over and you're under... -- the over and under is under and over -- Life and death is under and over we're over and under the over and under. We're above or below the cycle of life (heaven or hell?). See? It *kinda* makes sense....  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
okay, I hope I can get over this, though sure was good to see your name come up here...have you been gone or have I which one of us is back? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
How gracious of you....to respond...smiling here and I don't think I saw your last line when I commented.... just cause I don't comment doesn't mean I don't learn....you make me THINK! ... Kinda figured that was what it was about. Enjoyed, thank you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
lol I got it. Cute bsquirrel. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you all enjoyed. And VAS, I've been kept very busy at work, so I don't post as much as I used to. The "heyday" is over. Now I'm settling into my twilight years, and I'm only 26! :-o .m. |
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