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The Eye of the Storm
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The Eye of the Storm |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
The turbulent sheets of rain forge into timber snapping the sturdiness of trunks like sprigs the crackling explodes shattering hues of gold as agony cavorts tingling the spine of those who declare themself brave A glorious face that of Sea units with fury a monstrous beauty slashes the Earth with liquid motion as vortices submerge the skies into waving foams of aqua soft words of prayer are whispered in the eye as they wait patiently for the passing of the Storm |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
a most intriguing write this is....not quite sure exactly what kind of storm we are talking about, but it sure sounds like a twister to me. *S* Enjoyed this very much sister sister!! ~Salty |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
units? or unites? I could feel the powerful twisting forces of nature in this piece, ATOV. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Tone of Voice Enjoyed the symbolism. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A Tone Of Voice, I could almost see the eye of a Florida hurricane here... the way it's described on t.v., with the pictures. You did a very good job here.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
wow!! powerful write--enjoying your style!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Midnitesun . units? or unites? yes it suppose to be unite~! *S* I could feel the powerful twisting forces of nature in this piece, ATOV. Thank you so much~! *S* Seymour Tabin Enjoyed the symbolism ~~ Well thank you very much, I'm glad you did~!! garysgirl I could almost see the eye of a Florida hurricane here... the way it's described on t.v., with the pictures. You did a very good job here...... Why thank you ~GG~ Sunhine~! *S* Sandpiper, wow!! powerful write--enjoying your style!! Thank you Sandpiper, you make this body feel good~! *S* Atov~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
often, i have longed to dwell in the Eye but stayed too long in the Storm now, i have found peace In the Eye of Love lovely, and forcefull the crispness of your prose is a testament of your long legacy of good works. JkF |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Enjoyed this and love your name, "A Tone of Voice.'  Hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
passing shadows, a heartfelt thank you to you~! *S* ShadowRider, you are such a sweetheart and you have way that makes me feel special, as you do with everyone, you are a treasure, thank you......*S* NewEnglandlazurlu, now that is a name....*smile* I like it~! Thank you very much for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed my words.....*S* |
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