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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sighbeguns in canvas coffee sip gulp swallowed windless as sails that hesitate in empty dresses you made gravy after breakfast just for me you said cause you liked how it looked on my beard when I smiled I watched your fingers as you stirred and the bowl was lucky like a sky with wings touching under you said my eyes bothered you, made messes in places where you didn't have answers to wipe them up with and you might slip if I got any closer...... ©Dark |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WHOOOOOO HOOOOOOO ... DS IS BACK!!!!!!!  Welcome back my friend...you have been missed...OK...now I'll go read the poem.  |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
oh my DS, it's been a while since I've read your words, they are just as incredible as ever,.....the way you spin, Mmmm, Mmmm Atov~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
have missed reading you, glad your back here....  ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sighbeguns in canvas coffee sip gulp swallowed windless as sails that hesitate in empty dresses ================================ you said my eyes bothered you, made messes in places where you didn't have answers to wipe them up with and you might slip if I got any closer...... ================================= ahhh yes...your personifications of emotions are always the centerpieces of your writes...you create the intensity between the muse and poet with them.... very cool to read you again DS... the greedy moth says "more please?" Moths dont care if the flame is real |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH YES!!!! He's baaaaack! And in fine form too I might add... YIPPEE...yes...more please??!! ~Hugs & Smiles~ (Welcome Home!) ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Always enjoy your words, nice to see you back. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home... and thank you... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a truly fascinating weave...FASCINATING! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Messy eyes... enjoyed the style and the imagery |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome home.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
DS... nice to again see you here. You have lost nothing while away I see...the words are just as powerful as ever.. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Hello DS ....well of all the gin joints in all the world *S* It sure is nice stirring with you again. A lovely write indeed. ~Salty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome home dear friend.......... sending warm hugs your way..... missed ya buddie!!  oh yeah, love the stirrings in the poem!! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hope that "Hog" didn't leave you stranded somewhere. (that you didn't care to be) Your pen though, runs smooth as ever! ~wranx |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
windless as sails that hesitate in empty dresses I liked those lines and the way your words stir the air. Good to see you made it back DS~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God! I've missed your writing! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yay Where have you been, we've all missed you soooooooo much! You always have us looking through a parallel universe ever so clearly, sweet friend, now back up and down U.S 101 we go, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks to you all for your welcome back..... sorry my gypsy skin has been surfin the wind for a bit... Janet you bless me Atov, thanks to you Charisma, hug sandwhich to you Enchantress..you please me softly Sy, I am honored sir at your reviews Sunshine, coffee and you with the morning, what else could sooth so VAS, you humble me with your reads Midnitesun, bless your days with laughter, you started mine with smiles Poet Devine, spank you so much lady...carefully...on purpose Cpat Hair, a pleasure to have your visits, thanks to you Salty, may I help with the dishes? Thanks lady friend, good to see you here. GS, slow hugs for long hours my friend, thanks babe. Wranx...amigo, the iron one has had my attention for many miles...I think she gets jealous when she sees me with pen and paper thanks much Bluezy..you are a candy coated wiggle babe...thanks to you for your eye touches Passing Shadows, humble thanks with hug hands too, thank you Noah, my young old friend, you are constant as the dawn, thanks for your reviews |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
<---that is me beaming at youand this was like that delicious sip of coffee in the morning... I was gonna yell at you and ask where you've been, but enough that the prodigal poet as come home! Just please don't go asking about the fatted calf--it's been a long winter.  mmmmm...lovely lovely writing my friend. you have been missed. |
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