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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sometimes I elbow through a maze of thoughts Attached to me like waves of warts. They itch in wedged periphery And twitch my mind in ifery. They exercise a senior fun That will not stop until I’m done For that’s the way of aged play And my youth has passed away. From bravery to knavery I work these thoughts in slavery The wonders of my gardens glen Of ecstasies of now and then I build my castles of old fair Grout them with a honey’s dare Watch them glow in ghostly hue And fall in love with semi-true It is my visions Shangri-La And there I’ll shout my last hurrah. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I elbow through a maze of thoughts Attached to me like waves of warts. They itch in wedged periphery And twitch my mind in ifery. ================================== what you do with internal rhymes blows me little mothy mind  could that verse be any cooler????? I'll meet you in your mind's sanctuary of Shangri La ... we'll have tea, Randy, you and me at our party of hurrah. ( and a side order of winkies) *L**ww*    Moths dont care if the flame is real |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 enjoyed it very, very much  Charisma |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy a treat of castle boards with marble grain glued seamless enjoyed your skill sir Dark |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy!! Beautiful piece to greet the day.. You left wondereful images dancing in my mind. ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So glad to see you back in full swing. And we will have a tea party at our first stop, Eldorado and then go on to Shangri-la. WWRS Charisma Thank you for the like. Dark Stranger A beautiful comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress, What could be nicer. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh good morning, good morning sweet man! How do you find these words to rhyme and put them together to make sense? It just boggles this old brain... The master of words are you! Hugs, Marti A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Thank you sweet lady and the top of the mornin to you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Love the thought that Shangri-La exists![This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-09-2003 12:11 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun So do I, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I'd have to disagree with "sometimes", you always bring innocent joy and blessings ALL the time! (big hugggsssssss) This is a true gem, sweet friend, harrah for Shang-ri-La, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Such a lovely place, are we invited? Raf |
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