Open Poetry #24 |
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Piano Plays |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Feel the nature of beast upon your brow Break the cycle of what you will allow Boundaries cast in mud and myst must show Lies within dispenced with what you know Like love before the curse is rot Fever rains more oft than not Taught your mind recoil, spin To move from without within Forever brings the edges near A light In the hallway Casts a shadow But I am not scared For this Life is not Always unkind Feel what you can Enjoy while you do And the piano plays. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bob~ I really like this...very much. Love the overall 'feel' that you've created with your words. VERY nicely done. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
'feel while you can, enjoy while you do' and from this piano player, just keep that music going!! Really enjoyed this write, and the tune it echos in the air! ~~S~~ Pen how you truly feel... |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing this with us, I really enjoyed the read ![]() Andrew |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Bob, this is sooooooo wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, you recite quite a symphony here, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bob, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, well done! I love pianos! |
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