Open Poetry #24 |
something to say |
raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
I set out to tell you something today Then all my thoughts got in my way I want to tell you all that I had on my mind But that was too much and the words were hard to find I wanted to say something to let you know I was still here But then my pen became crippled by fear My emotions were cluttered as they came into play There was so much I wanted you to know but still noting to say I had something I wanted to tell But all my thoughts and fears cast a powerful spell The pen was still and the paper blank Realizing that my hart sank I wanted to tell you something maybe I just didn’t know how I wished to be clever but wit left me just now All this empty effort made me quite blue But what I wanted to say was that I love you |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Well I have not been here in at least two years! I lost access to a computer for time, and I hate to say it but I forgot about this site for awhile. I have recently renewed my interest in writing and reading poetry, and I hope improved. Now that I have found this site again I am happy to know it is still here! |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
this was totally lovely, bravo! must add this to my reading list |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amber, we're all so happy you're back, sweet friend, I elieve as long as this poetic family remains together, this forum will always be up! (sigh) God Bless You sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome back! glad you remembered we were here! Hope to read more of you! |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
thank you all. glad to be back! and glad you liked this poem... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Amberlyn, Welcome back....I enjoyed this a lot and yes, it is hard to find a way to say it, and to get tongue-tied when it comes to those three simple words.... enjoyed, hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome home. Now go fix hart to heart. Enjoyed this write, Amberlyn. |
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