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Just Sign |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
 You knew this day would come Inevitable, been due a long long time Still the sadness is somewhat overwhelming As you reflect over the years in your mind Remember when you took those vows Clear in your mind to this day Only takes a signature from the pen To make the promise of long ago go away Chalk it up as another experience song Put it alongside all of your other failures in life As your memory list gets long, with things gone wrong Time now, for reflections in your mind of struggle,and strife Memories of the past, in vivid twenty twenty vision Serve to ignite the fire of sadness, of past decision The thought to yourself, questions if you've ever done anything right As you chose love, for your guiding light So don't hesitate, cut the cord, Just sign and date, seal this fate, Using the pen as your sword For it is done every day, This time, it's well overdue Just sign, on the dotted line The official end of me...and of you Copyright © -2001 Dennis Hicks All Rights Reserved by Author |
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bluRaven Junior Member
since 2003-01-08
Posts 18Richmond, VA |
very touching~~ ~muahh "~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, this is very sad. But, such a common thing in our world today. Have you learned anything from that relationship? I've learned a lot from my past heartaches and broken promises, and so has my Love from his past. We have talked for hours about these situations. I really believe that we both have learned a lot from our past. But, we both still know that to keep our love alive and our relationship healthy, we have to work together at it. BTW, you do a very good job of expressing your feelings in your poetry. I can tell that it's from your heart. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-09-2003 12:23 AM).] |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
this piece seemed very sad to me..... it's hard to pick up and move on, believe me i know, hugs to you |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Heart touching....and well written, capturing much of the finality.... sad.... warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Guess it does no good to refuse, does it? So many signatures on file, so many love stories stamped out. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
another one bites the dust, interesting poem |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dennis, just the way this is written brings out the somber and sad feel of the moment which was a very significant part of two peoples lives... Well written, lots of impact in this... |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thanks to all for your kind words. I appreciate them. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hindsight is 20/20, yes. Good piece! I went through it too...and I'm glad. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Very sad to say i have been here more than once>> Memories of the past, in vivid twenty twenty vision Serve to ignite the fire of sadness, of past decision The thought to yourself, questions if you've ever done anything right As you chose love, for your guiding light This is well penned with skill on this topic... take care, Cher Poetry is: |
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