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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SICKLY TODAY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I think I'm sick, perhaps have the flu, happened last night when I was kissing you, so now my brains are going down the drain, too many flushes, I can’t even argue… H’aaaa… But it was worth knowing those soft lips, and when I touched silk with fingertips, then you coughed loudly in my tender ear, today I’ve tried to listen, but can hardly hear… Your lips are moving… But it was worth every bit I still say, knowing you close like that, by the way, and listening to sighs between the coughs, guess it was just one of the tradeoffs… Now I’m paying! Oh yes, I certainly feel really sickly today, and it was because of things last night, but you know I'd do it all over again, just to know you close by candlelight.... H’mmmmmm… ~~~~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is cute and I couldn't help but giggle. I was seeing the picture in my mind of you and here all snuggled up kissing, then she starts coughing in your ear...HaHa!! I do hope you are just playing and that you're not really sick!?!  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A hot toddy perhaps? Watch out for bugs that you can't see... Cute, Bill... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC: I think the flu bug has done caught up to you. Nothing is worth feeling like poo poo. Next time - when someone is coughing in your ear - step back 6 feet and blow them a kiss or two. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiling Bill. I sooo know you would...very cute write. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Really cute Bill...and I hope you're not really sick. ~Hugs....from a distance~  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ill take the flu to experience a little burning up with you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love sick never sounded so good~ Now take your medicine and say aahhhh. Nice poem BC~ |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Too cute. It made me laugh but mostly it made me remember soft touches and whispered sighs, thanx. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
For everyone - nope not kidding, this BC is a hurting dude... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, I'm so sorry you're sick, sweet friend, I'm glad at least you got to spend special time with someone very special as you deserve such true happiness! I too have had a disease, but not in my body, but in my heart! (wipes tears) Please IM me soon and I'll tell you everything, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!Mya love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too, me too |
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