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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-01-08 11:51 AM


Some of these are bones of mine,
and not blood of heart.

Some of these are past snatched dreams
unresolved, asleep.

Some of these are greasy mouths
begging for new pens.

Some of these are candle wax
dripping in a lake.

Some of these are floating by
never to be claimed.

Some of these are a new sky.
Some have gone away.

© Copyright 2003 MPC - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-08 01:42 PM




Mike,

I liked the floating by ones. An interesting write. Made me think.


Warm regards,  Pat

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EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2003-01-08 01:54 PM


reading the old scrapbook? It's amazing what you can find in your old work that you never knew was there
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-01-08 05:02 PM


just keep adding to your collection,
like the texture of this

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-08 05:15 PM


Yes, Mike, it is interesting to read over your old stuff, isn't it?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-01-08 05:44 PM


they are all that and some...some are fodder for the worms... or at least mine are..


bsquirrel
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6 posted 2003-01-08 06:06 PM


Exactly, Cpat. Exactly.
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