Open Poetry #24 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
grey birds assemble on snowbleached rooftops, rest a few and wait with me, for yellow flowers to come, soon scatter off, blend into the bare winter sky, leaving me to myself, with these endless thoughts [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-08-2003 07:18 AM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And they usually fly over me and leave me a reminder to get out of the way next time...a very descriptive write sweetie... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
This is very nice.. Keep writing.... Hugesssss
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
inkedgoddesss, sometimes those endless thoughts just won't go away, will they? (me laughing at Toerag's reply........) "Love makes the world go around" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Those thoughts never do seem to end. My mind is filled with a lot of them. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
In hopes of an early spring... I enjoyed this.. ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love poems that have that "alone with my thoughts" quality... This reverberates, m. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Don't get caught up to deeply in those thoughts is all i can offer |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
![]() ~Titus "A life unexamined is not worth living." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know it too |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Sometimes thinking to much is not a good thing. Occasionally you need to go with the flow. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
nicely done! Charisma |
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