Open Poetry #24 |
the path home |
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
breaking the silence the broken bridge weathered timber cracked how is it I hear your father's boat slicing the water deep in the bitterroot slope perhaps it is just a creak in the tired birch or perhaps the hours have passed and nodding eyes cannot wait with such bracelets of sorrow yet I over slept the mourn hoping to find you in my dream so often a kind of kaleidoscopic beauty has such infinite variety disclosed to the slumbering eyes in a slowly evolving movement in the early dawn when every sound appears audible even to the soft spilling breeze where the creek lies with the snow grasping limbs of laden bridge Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God! This is perfectly beautiful!!! How'd it get all the way down here without a reply? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Enjoyed this so much! Another one of those poems, (rare) that I don't take a breath until the last word....phew, this is beautiful! Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done....picture perfect in fact....(I hear those creaks too...but it's usually my back when I get up in the morning) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
lucky You always see past the outside, into the feeling of things. Beautiful. Hugs to you and Rosemary. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, you always seem to look deep into the beauty of things and captivate the moment with serenity! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dale, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And lucky returns, breaking the silence... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know I read this before, but damn...it's beautiful! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This has such a wistful beauty - of loving and longing! What a journey, and how enjoyable! Perfect form, as usual, my sweet one! |
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