Open Poetry #24 |
In my life |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
In my life, I'll read your ambitions, upon proud paper, mind will tremble, at the print. Hidden atmospheres you open, with the words you play, derived from sleepless nights. My geocentric vision, sees from the center, not to hinder, but revel, in this dedication. Your dreams, are as important to me, as mine. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding! My dreams are sometimes totally insane! But they are mine, so that makes them special, right? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop A beautiful thought, thank you. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ah, how beautiful the thought! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A beautiful statement, its amazing how any two people can share similar dreams and never physically meet each other ... ... that's the soul for you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, this is so beautiful...the thought and the poem. You are such a special person, friend, with such a big heart. I feel the same way, another's dreams shouln't be put down or made fun of, but respected, cherished and encouraged, just as if they're our own dreams. Thanks for this,dear friend.... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-07-2003 11:35 AM).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
My geocentric vision, sees from the center, not to hinder, but revel, in this dedication. a very thoughtful and thought-provoking statement.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful and kind-hearted thoughts |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thankyou all for your replies. i think its important to let those you love know that they are free to pursue their dreams. i've known people who have been made to give up on their ambitions due to someone around them. and their pain is often immense and hugely bitter. i love it here, because we share our dreams openly, and every thought that is written here,by each of you,teaches me something different every day. This place has a really unique feeling to it. and is very important to me. sorry for getting all emotional! ha ha. so thanks to you all. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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