Open Poetry #24 |
Love flame |
jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Your love was great, The sacriface was true, And all my heart poured out as I loved you, So now we stand, Alittle different this time, Our hearts have changed, And so we said our goodbyes, So now with all of these tears in my eyes, We both know that surely of love flame has died, I know that the flame lives in our heart, But mine quit beating now that we are apart, The flame has died swollowed by the dark, Now nothing not even a spark, For when my flame died my heart did to, My heart died from the loss of you, So now as we stand trying to make sense of it all, We know that the flame has died, And my back is aganist the wall, So now if you ask will I love again, Well that is another time another place my friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes that is another time and another place...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Always room for another time and place. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
This was pretty good. I can feel how you felt when you wrote this. Course, that could be because I know you so well. Good write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the ending...wonderfully sad piece |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a good poem with lots of emotions felt from it.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
yea I was just writing to my ex when I started this I am glad you liked it |
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