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Time Please Tell Me
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Time Please Tell Me |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas 
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I hear his voice in my head. he loves to hear me laugh he says and I laugh he hates to hear me cry but, understands the need and I cry a hand that touches me from afar I dream with him and he tells me ..be careful what I wish for so I wish for only good for he says it just might happen I pause to see what tomorrow brings A recipe to make the relationship work to bond our parallels and value our opposites time please tell me . . . . and I wait [This message has been edited by Salty (01-07-2003 05:42 PM).] |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
time will tell what future has in hold for u  i enjoyed your write The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Thank you Zenny....do u know how to speed it up any *S* Thank you for joining me today ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmm... time marks the passing and the story is told by the players acting on that passing... ( chuckling) NIcely written...and I hope for you the story told to unfold with gentle ease...and love.. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Hmmm I think you confused me ...  Naw, I know what your saying and I thank you for the good wishes. I think I look a little lopsided today..do U? I mean the writing silly Salty |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Hey that was awsome! and I love your picture too. You look different than I imagined, but so does everyone else. Never be normal! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Salty..wasn't going to mention that you seemed to be leaning a bit to one side... but since you brought it up.I just figured you were standing on a hill.. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
thank You wind I saw your picture the first time I read you...so I pictured you quite well  and what a delightful person you are!!!~Salty |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
giggling at the Cpat Hair |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Salty, I like this, I remember the wondering. But just staying in the day and enjoying each precious moment ... that is the best thing you can do...and let nature take it's course. I am happy for you..... Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I agree Pat..... I'm really in not in hurry. It would be nice to be able to tell the future sometimes though *S*. I think I'll just enjoy myself and my independce right now. thank u so much for reading. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
que sera sera Ms Salty, I like this, only time will tell for sure, about everything. Don't you agree it's better we don't know our future? There are a few years if I'd known what was about to take place, I'd shot myself.....LOL~! ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
lolol .... yeah me too. I think you are absolutely right. Still there are those couple of questions that would be really nice to have answers to... wouldn't be wasting your time until you figured it all out. I Know ...that's cheating, and so until then I'll just enjoy the ride. thanks for reading missy Salty |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write...enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Thank you so much Nancy for reading and replying. Salty~ In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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